Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, May 6, 2020
Titanic news paper
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Hi James.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant headline, very catchy, well done. You have included a lot of information about the sinking of the Titanic. Could you imagine being one of the passengers onboard at the time. It would have been very scary, especially in the dark.
Did you know anything about the Titanic before having to write this?
Hi James
ReplyDeleteYou seem to have a ship theme in your learning! Have you travelled on boats or ships? Have you been on the Interislander Ferry from Picton? I love your research work into Titanic. Like Michelle I'm super impressed with your headline and choice of images. They really caught my attention. I wonder why the ship broke in two after hitting the iceberg.