We are learning to expand our sentences with detail.
Oscar cried.
When: Yesterday
Where: in the corner
Why: John was being mean to him
Yesterday, Oscar cried in the corner because John was being real mean to him.
They had an argument.
When: lunchtime
Where: in the locker room
Why: because Mia was saying mean things.
At lunchtime Eli and Mia had an argument in the locker room because Mia was saying mean things.
What do you think of my expanded sentences?
Hi James,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading the sentences that you expanded. They had so much more detail in them. You have done a fantastic job. Amazing!
Mrs Bryce