Today I have been working on a piece of writing called Umbrella UMBRELLA
Early one stormy morning, the door to Miss Elem’s Home For Children creaked open. The girl with the bright yellow umbrella nervously creeped through the door to find an orphanage before finding a Home for her Umbrella. not wanting to be seen, Jimbob quickly whipped his head around the door frame. Standing off to the side the girl silently observed as children searched in the box for hidden treasures. The girl smiled as she watched the little boy flying around the room like an astronaut. Her smile quickly faded as she looked back at the umbrella stand and all she saw was some puddles. Her beloved umbrella had vanished out of thin air.
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