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Thursday, April 30, 2020

I remember ANZAC

As i am standing here on ANZAC day i can smell the fragrant  flowery smell of the poppies. The colourful red sea of poppies are waving in the breeze. I feel the cold wind stinging my face. I feel so sad my heart is hurting  as I remember my friends I have lost. I remember being scared when I was being shot at and I can still hear the sound of the gunfire.
As the orange fiery sun creeps up behind the poppies I feel relieved to be here. And proud to have protected NZ.
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  1. Michelle WrightMay 4, 2020 at 7:40 AM

    Hi James,

    Very impressed by your descriptive writing. I like words like "orange,fiery sun" and "relieved to be here". Can you tell me a bit more about what you know about ANZAC day. Why are you feeling proud?

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